there are words
that the mouth cannot speak
feelings that pen
cannot put into writing
nor the eyes can reveal
there are sorrows
that smiles try to conceal
emotions tied for expression
pain that throbs like eternity
and scars that never heal
there are memories that outgrow time
and can never be put to oblivion
people who have touched our lives
who made a difference in us
and are simply unforgettable...
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The poem UNFORGETTABLE was spoken by a person who experienced different changes in his life brought by people around him that gave meaning to his existence.He was a person reminiscing the past of his journey in this world. This happened during a time of SILENCE wherein the speaker recall some unforgettable events which somehow contributed to the development of his well-being.The central purpose of the poem is about looking back into your past life's events and carrying out memories that helps you to establish as a better catalyst of the society.It showed a tone of AMUSEMENT and EMPTINESS.AMUSEMENT because he was very much overwhelmed of the feeling that he was not alone in his life and EMPTINESS for having nothing so intolerable as to be in a state of complete rest, without passions, without occupation, without diversion, without effort. Then he feels his nullity, loneliness, inadequacy, dependence, helplessness, emptiness. This was achieved by simply stating the memories of the past.The diction was GENTEEL/REFINED namely by the following words:memories that outgrow time;oblivion;simply unforgettable.The stated words were used as refinement for the reader to make an appropriate understanding about the poem.There were imagery of SIGHT(visual images)being used.Figures of speech are being used such as PERSONIFICATION-"eyes can reveal".."there are sorrows
that smiles try to conceal.SYMBOLS-"scars,that symbolizes prints of sadness nor happiness:"eternity,that symbolizes ever lasting grief".HYPERBOLE-"pain that throbs like eternity";"words that mouth cannot speak".
The poem UNFORGETTABLE was spoken by a person who experienced different changes in his life brought by people around him that gave meaning to his existence.He was a person reminiscing the past of his journey in this world. This happened during a time of SILENCE wherein the speaker recall some unforgettable events which somehow contributed to the development of his well-being.The central purpose of the poem is about looking back into your past life's events and carrying out memories that helps you to establish as a better catalyst of the society.It showed a tone of AMUSEMENT and EMPTINESS.AMUSEMENT because he was very much overwhelmed of the feeling that he was not alone in his life and EMPTINESS for having nothing so intolerable as to be in a state of complete rest, without passions, without occupation, without diversion, without effort. Then he feels his nullity, loneliness, inadequacy, dependence, helplessness, emptiness. This was achieved by simply stating the memories of the past.The diction was GENTEEL/REFINED namely by the following words:memories that outgrow time;oblivion;simply unforgettable.The stated words were used as refinement for the reader to make an appropriate understanding about the poem.There were imagery of SIGHT(visual images)being used.Figures of speech are being used such as PERSONIFICATION-"eyes can reveal".."there are sorrows
that smiles try to conceal.SYMBOLS-"scars,that symbolizes prints of sadness nor happiness:"eternity,that symbolizes ever lasting grief".HYPERBOLE-"pain that throbs like eternity";"words that mouth cannot speak".
The speaker is the author herself and I guess the author is being sentimental.
It might be during a special occasion when the author remembered something or a memory of before that flashed back;and the setting place might be indoors.
The central purpose of the poem is to inform. Wherein the central idea of the poem tells us that there are really times or moments in our life that we tend to forget but we can't. There are really some point in life where we can't forget the event, person, or the feeling that lies behind it.
For me all the words are well chosen because I know that it came from the heart of the author and I can sense the emotion.
I can see an image of a person alone in his room, thinking of something or just simply reminiscing. He wanted to write something but can't start the words to write; he wanted to speak but doesn't know the words to utter.
Tone: Sad/Sentimental
April Rose Rafaela
BEED-3
TTh 2:30-4:00 PM
Questions:
1. Who is the speaker?What kind of person is the speaker?
-a person unforgettable his/her feelings.
-i think the speaker , speak with his/her emotions.
2 . Is there an identifiable audience for the speaker? What can we know about it(her,him, or them)?
-none
-there's no specific identity
3. what is the occasion?
-the author is just wondering for himself.
4. What is the settings in time(hour,season,century and so on)?
- provably this is night time.
5.What is the setting in place (indoors our out,city or country,land or sea, region,country,hemisphere)?
-the setting place is indoor.
6.What is the central purpose of the poem?
the central of the poem is conscience
7.State the cental idea or theme of the poem in a sentence.
-The central idea is the author is wondering of himself. Thinking of unforgettable moments in his/her life.
8. What is tone of the poem? How is it achieved?
-the tone of the poem is loonly
-it is achieved by letting go once emotion to be true to your feelings.
11. Discuss the diction of the poe. Point out words that are particular well choosen and explain why.
-the dictio of the poem is good.
-the well choosen words are:
• feelings- the emotional reaction and experience of the speaker.
• Reveal- expose or show his/her experience.
13. point out examples of metaphor,simile,personification, and metonymy, and explain their appropriateness.
Simile:
Example:
• the emotions tied for expression pain that throbs like eternity.
Questions:
1. Who is the speaker?What kind of person is the speaker?
-a person unforgettable his/her feelings.
-i think the speaker , speak with his/her emotions.
2 . Is there an identifiable audience for the speaker? What can we know about it(her,him, or them)?
-none
-there's no specific identity
3. what is the occasion?
-the author is just wondering for himself.
4. What is the settings in time(hour,season,century and so on)?
- provably this is night time.
5.What is the setting in place (indoors our out,city or country,land or sea, region,country,hemisphere)?
-the setting place is indoor.
6.What is the central purpose of the poem?
the central of the poem is conscience
7.State the central idea or theme of the poem in a sentence.
-The central idea is the author is wondering of himself. Thinking of unforgettable moments in his/her life.
8. What is tone of the poem? How is it achieved?
-the tone of the poem is lo only
-it is achieved by letting go once emotion to be true to your feelings.
11. Discuss the diction of the Poe. Point out words that are particular well choose and explain why.
-the diction of the poem is good.
-the well chosen words are:
• feelings- the emotional reaction and experience of the speaker.
• Reveal- expose or show his/her experience.
13. point out examples of metaphor,simile,personification, and metonymy, and explain their appropriateness.
Simile:
Example:
• the emotions tied for expression pain that throbs like eternity.
Questions:
1. Who is the speaker?What kind of person is the speaker?
-a person unforgettable his/her feelings.
-i think the speaker , speak with his/her emotions.
2 . Is there an identifiable audience for the speaker? What can we know about it(her,him, or them)?
-none
-there's no specific identity
3. what is the occasion?
-the author is just wondering for himself.
4. What is the settings in time(hour,season,century and so on)?
- provably this is night time.
5.What is the setting in place (indoors our out,city or country,land or sea, region,country,hemisphere)?
-the setting place is indoor.
6.What is the central purpose of the poem?
the central of the poem is conscience
7.State the central idea or theme of the poem in a sentence.
-The central idea is the author is wondering of himself. Thinking of unforgettable moments in his/her life.
8. What is tone of the poem? How is it achieved?
-the tone of the poem is loonly
-it is achieved by letting go once emotion to be true to your feelings.
11. Discuss the diction of the Poe. Point out words that are particular well choosen and explain why.
-the diction of the poem is good.
-the well choosen words are:
• feelings- the emotional reaction and experience of the speaker.
• Reveal- expose or show his/her experience.
13. point out examples of metaphor,simile,personification, and metonymy, and explain their appropriateness.
Simile:
Example:
• the emotions tied for expression pain that throbs like eternity.
Jocelyn L.Bagaporo
BEED-3
Questions:
1. Who is the speaker?What kind of person is the speaker?
-a person unforgettable his/her feelings.
-i think the speaker , speak with his/her emotions.
2 . Is there an identifiable audience for the speaker? What can we know about it(her,him, or them)?
-none
-there's no specific identity
3. what is the occasion?
-the author is just wondering for himself.
4. What is the settings in time(hour,season,century and so on)?
- provably this is night time.
5.What is the setting in place (indoors our out,city or country,land or sea, region,country,hemisphere)?
-the setting place is indoor.
6.What is the central purpose of the poem?
the central of the poem is conscience
7.State the central idea or theme of the poem in a sentence.
-The central idea is the author is wondering of himself. Thinking of unforgettable moments in his/her life.
8. What is tone of the poem? How is it achieved?
-the tone of the poem is loonly
-it is achieved by letting go once emotion to be true to your feelings.
11. Discuss the diction of the poe. Point out words that are particular well choosen and explain why.
-the dictio of the poem is good.
-the well choosen words are:
• feelings- the emotional reaction and experience of the speaker.
• Reveal- expose or show his/her experience.
13. point out examples of metaphor,simile,personification, and metonymy, and explain their appropriateness.
Simile:
Example:
• the emotions tied for expression pain that throbs like eternity.
Questions:
1. Who is the speaker?What kind of person is the speaker?
-a person unforgettable his/her feelings.
-i think the speaker , speak with his/her emotions.
2 . Is there an identifiable audience for the speaker? What can we know about it(her,him, or them)?
-none
-there's no specific identity
3. what is the occasion?
-the author is just wondering for himself.
4. What is the settings in time(hour,season,century and so on)?
- provably this is night time.
5.What is the setting in place (indoors our out,city or country,land or sea, region,country,hemisphere)?
-the setting place is indoor.
6.What is the central purpose of the poem?
the central of the poem is conscience
7.State the central idea or theme of the poem in a sentence.
-The central idea is the author is wondering of himself. Thinking of unforgettable moments in his/her life.
8. What is tone of the poem? How is it achieved?
-the tone of the poem is lo only
-it is achieved by letting go once emotion to be true to your feelings.
11. Discuss the diction of the Poe. Point out words that are particular well choose and explain why.
-the diction of the poem is good.
-the well chosen words are:
• feelings- the emotional reaction and experience of the speaker.
• Reveal- expose or show his/her experience.
13. point out examples of metaphor,simile,personification, and metonymy, and explain their appropriateness.
Simile:
Example:
• the emotions tied for expression pain that throbs like eternity.
Anonymous said...
1.-the speaker is the author himself and a speaker who experienced different changes in life.
-the speker, speaks of his/her emotions.
2.-none
-there's no specific identity.
3.-the author is just reminiscing of the memories that he/she can't forget.
4.-i think it's night time.
5.-the setting or the place is indoor.
6.-the central purpose of the poem is that, he/she's looking back of his/her past life's events that happened in his/her life. a memories that can't forget easily .
7.-the central idea or theme of the poem, he/she thinks or reminiscing the memories of his/her life that can't easily forget.
8.-the tone of the poem is sad and sentimental.
11.-the diction of the poem is very,very ok and very good.
13.-Hyperbole:pain that throbs like eternity,words that mouth can't speak.
Carretas,Chergel A.
BEED-2
TTH-2:30-4:00
anonymous said...
1.-the speaker of the poem is the speaker himself..
2.-none
-there's no specific identity.
3.she's just reminiscing on his/her memories.
4.the setting of time in the poem is night time.
5.the setting in place of the poem, i think it's indoor.
6.the central purpose of the poem is that he/she is reminiscing of the life's events thathappened to her life.
8.the tone of the poem is sad and sentimental.
11.the diction pf the poem is good and i like it.
13.hyperbole-pain that throbs like eternity,words that mouth van't speak.
Lecias,Grace Avon
BEED-2
The speaker is the author herself and i think the author this time is being sentimental. The occasion is, during the time when he/she remember, his/her unforgettable experienced before.The setting place is maybe indoors.The central purpose of the poem is to inform the readers that there are times in our life that we try to forget but its hard forget it. Especially, if it is a special person or event for us, or even the person who hurts us . I can see an image of a person alone, while his/ her thinking something or his/her just reminiscing. The tone of the poem is sad and sentimental.
"He wanted to write something but can't start the words to write; he wanted to speak but doesn't know the words to utter." i think its personification.
Lovella Elevera
1) the author is the speaker. Emotional kind of speaker.
2.) People is the audience of the speaker. People who have touched lives.
3.) The occasion would be at night with a solemn place that makes the speaker think deeply with the unforgettable memories.
4.) past,old days...
5.) Land, sea side where the speaker reminisce happiness and sadness memories.
6.) The central purpose of the poem is that remembering people that have done something memorable.People that have touched significantly.
7.) significant memories that are unforgettable.
8.) soft and touching
11.) Simply Unforgettable- These words touches and opened my mind, heart and soul. Because we usually remember people that have done great to us. We didn't put so much value to those who have done little things to us.
12.) mix imagery where there are happiness and sadness.
13.) simile- pain that throbs like eternity
solamo, mellissa grace m.
If you say it is unforgettable… . a person, a place or a thing means a lot to you.. It is not easy to forget things that you yourself have a deep feeling of attachment or you have special thought if you will think of that event, thing or a person. Being attached so much with someone makes you sometimes feel sad.. if you have done something that regrets you most and happy… if you did good things and memories. But I think life is more about acceptance… on how would you want to stay that person in your mind. Thou it is really hard to forget meaningful things but I think to forget special person or event will need and will take a long time in order for you to perfectly forget about it. There was this saying “if you will never say goodbye, you will never say Hello.”
--- I like it when the writer pointed this line “people who have touched our lives who made a difference in us and are simply unforgettable...”
Daphne Palahang
BEED-2
If you say it is unforgetable… . a person, a place or a thing means a lot to you.. It is not easy to forget things that you yourself have a deep feeling of attachment or you have special thought if you will think of that event, thing or a person. Being attached so much with someone makes you sometimes feel sad.. if you have done something that regrets you most and happy… if you did good things and memories. But I think life is more about acceptance… on how would you want to stay that person in your mind. Thou it is really hard to forget meaningful things but I think to forget special person or event will need and will take a long time in order for you to perfectly forget about it. There was this saying “if you will never say goodbye, you will never say Hello.”
--- I like it when the writer pointed this line “people who have touched our lives who made a difference in us and are simply unforgettable...”
Daphne Palahang
BEED-2
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