like a fully inflated balloon
i let go of what had been blowing up inside
set it free until i see it no more
it flies high to the skies
until the clouds kiss it
and the sun embraces it
the wide horizon welcomes it warmly
the space cherish its presence
it is where it is supposed to stay
but it won't stay there forever
for it too will burst and shatter into pieces
like this this poor weary heart
ready to rupture and split open like fresh wound
my spirit so barren,my soul so lost
my heart so void..
but the chasm within is unbearable
can no longer bear the weight of loads
nor contain the rancour it gives me
it devoured my whole being
consumed the persona in me
if i am emptied, i can have another fill
when everything is poured out
let the putrid stench revelation
be replaced with a potpourri of heavenly whiff
and fragrance of peace and love
you've got to spill the surety
of your affection, that i too need
i can have another try
i can be broken again and again
and gathering the pieces won't be hard anymore
but i can never hold each debris
that falls out of place
cleanse me from all impurities
that tarnished my being
make me, mold me again like a beautiful vessel;
a perfect masterpiece
seethed with love and compassion
bathed with the sunshine of hope
unbustled, chaste and unblemished
consecrate me with serenity and fortitude
mend me and make me whole again...
let me fly not like a balloon which
will soon split open
but like an eagle that soars high
and never gets weary...
11 comments:
in this.. its show that life is like a wheel.. sometimes, u are in a top. but sometimes you go down, and with the help of god, with you, everything is possible.
Isnihaya M. MUsa
as what i have read, the title is
"a prayer",it is all about life of a person that have wants to get their life but he/she can not do it if there is no one will push it but then
he/she get it in what he/she wants too but not all the time will always
there.that kind of a good life.
insirah manding
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The poem A PRAYER cited how wonderful life is. But no matter how pretty it is, it is still normally troubled with major problems. These problems may let us make helpless and put us down, and even making us losing the knowledge and power to overcome it. It may be so hard to face all our adversities but we failed to realize that God has designed it to make us a better individual. God may put us into the hardest point in our life that may shatter us into pieces but we failed to understand that God made it to mold us into a strong person in facing the difficulties of life. We will not be any more like a balloon which will soon be burst but we will be eagles who will soar high for great successes.
Theme:life is full of trials but these trials will make us in becoming a more courageous person in facing problems in life.
tone: dramatic
Renalyn Y. Sabuelva
BEED 3
In my own interpretation on this prayer it is all about the life that he/she want to have another chance to live and prove to the people that she has a willingness to change and make it better in the second time arround of his/her life. life is full of sacrifice that we never know if is right or wrong. failure is not a failure to meet your goal in life.no man or human will ever truly know that he has succeded untill he experience an apparent failure.
TONE
SAD
JAYCRESEL T. REAMBONANZA
As what i have read to this prayer it is sent as the inspiration in life.it is said that god give as trial that can make as strong to face the problem in life. God give asthe major problem because he that we have the power to overcome this problem. Trial is always there to test our faith in him. we must be strong to do anything to give our best.and no man become strong without struggle with adversity, resistance,and problems. struggle make us strong and in the process of overcoming , we achieve happiness.we learn threby how despite everything life can become a joyous adventure.
tone
lonely
Mary ann BOybanting
Tone: sad
theme: life is encountering trials
in this poem "The prayer "talks about how life is challenging,and how were facing trials in our life. From that problem were getting stronger to face the problem. From that problem also we get a lesson from what we did.
Allan Rey Cabahug
BEED-3
In this poem " The prayer", on my own interpretation life is full of trials we facing the problem even if this is worst problem were encountering. From that problem we getting stronger to face the problem and never to surrender of what trials were in facing. God is always there for us to guide us.
Tone: solemn
Theme: Life is full of trials and challenge
Rhea Regina E. Gabriza
BEED-3
MOOD:GLAD
TONE:HOPEFUL
The poem expresses one selfs feeling. To what the surrounding bear himself.A person could no longer make life to the fullest without admitting some sorts of warriors deep inside.You may fall down but will be pushed again and strive to the path of life.
FATIMA CLAUDINE A.DIGNADICE
1.The speakers the author.He / she is a lonely type of person.
2.The audience is the reader.
3.It is an ordinary day.
4.The settings in time is Tuesday,February 9,2010.
5.The settings in place is outside or at the open field.
6.The purpose of the poem is to give information to the reader and to express the feeling of the writer.
7.The theme of the poem that everything is temporary .
8.The tone of the poem is sad.
11.The word that well chosen is the word balloon because it represents the heart or feeling that burst and fly once it hurt.
12.The imagery of the poem is very related to life experiences.
13.Metaphor:like an balloon which will soon split open.
Simile:like an eagle.
personification:
until the clouds kiss it
and the sun embraces it.
14.The poem is allegorical because the poem has message and meaning to the readers.
15.overstatement:
my spirit so barren,
my soul so lost
my heart is void.
To make the poem realistic and creative.So that the reader or the audience will be touched about the poem.
JEAN CLAUDE C. de los REYES
BEED -3
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