Every vein calls for restoration
A soul deeply entangled in a maze
Unsolved, complex and vexing
A spirit barren and lost
Totally drained and deranged
A throbbing soreness in the cranium
A constant grapple within
Stretching, pinching my system back to reality
alone, torn, groping and I ask, where am I?
The wise speaks of his wits
The powerful, of his might
The wealthy, of his uncountable riches
The king, of his royal robe
They boast for what they have
But haven’t found out what they do not have
They flaunt their luxurious possessions
But conceal their rotten ego
I knelt down in humility, pleading for help
For nothing else can bring me back to life
But there is someone who can bring back life to me
My Redeemer, my Light!
8 comments:
Theme: The person who believe the truth and his/her strength is the person who will survive.
Tone : Sincere and Serious
The poem is all about a person who are confused and disturb, trying to find something about herself, she was blinded to her own strength but accepting the truth will set her free.
Dertireza Sambaan
Phil. Lit
10:30-12:00
Dino Hinampas
Theme:
God is the center of everything , whenever you are weary. He holds your hand if you lose your way.
Tone: sad , lonely , sorrow
Comment:
This poem talks about your faith in God . If you fell abandoned by somebody and you fell
that you have no company to lessen the pain, back to the arms of God and you will be cure for happiness forever.
theme: never be blinded with precious instead open your eyes with truth even its a rock
tone: self confusion
Interpretation: the poem talk about someone whos blinded with lies, only see precious things but never claim those unpleasant for eyes not even identifiying its real worth. perhaps it a human nature.
Theme: Not all pleasant things are precious but most of rocks are brilliant.
Tone: Confusion and selfishness
Interpretation:
The poem talk about someone whose blindedwith lies because of it's beauty but never appreciate the truth for it's covered with mess. In real scenario of life it's true most people are claiming diamonds but neglecting the rocks.
Manilyn Grace Q. Pino
Theme:
The person who lost their soul, and didn’t know what to do, have always had a chance to restore, just be humble and admit and learn what’s the lesson we get from the people who lost with it. Have courage and stand on God side, He knows everything that human need to know. Don’t be stubborn; keep eye open as well as the heart. God almighty will lead you to the right way of life.
Tone: heart and soul cried, lost his way
Comment:
This poem is about a lost soul, who struggling to death, he live on earth but his soul is already dead. He does everything in his power to be happy at all but still walking in the nightmare…The only thing he needs to do is back to the light of God by accepting God in his life, so his soul will be alive and contented.
Nick Robert M. Gomez
Theme:Eartly possessions can make man's lost, but through God Comfort a man will be found and live again.
Tone: self-confusion and Sincerety
The poem talks about a person who is being lost and hopeless, considered to be the most downfall point in a human life. Wherein faith, indentity and position in her life are in the great
deflation.The through happiness of life is not the material things, but the real essence of life is believing in God that can help us seek the pure grace and peace.
Annalou T. Quinilitan
Phil.Lit.
10:30-12:00
Theme:Eartly possessions can make man's lost, but through God Comfort a man will be found and live again.
Tone: self-confusion and Sincerety
The poem talks about a person who is being lost and hopeless, considered to be the most downfall point in a human life. Wherein faith, indentity and position in her life are in the great
deflation.The through happiness of life is not the material things, but the real essence of life is believing in God that can help us seek the pure grace and peace.
Annalou T. Quinilitan
Phil.Lit.
10:30-12:00
Russel Emperado
1. A person who was a sinner before has done a lot of things that against the rule of our God and now he wants reconcile with God and ask his forgiveness.
2. The audience are the co-sinner of the speaker
3. Confession
4. Praying time
5. Church or house
6. Forgiveness and reconciliation
7. Being a sinner we must regret all of these and we must accept and admit in front to our Almighty God and we must ask His forgiveness and believe in Him.
8. Regretful and pitiful as the speaker is asking forgiveness. It could be achieved successfully because God always forgive those who ask His forgiveness
11. The diction of this poem was very unusual although they still fitted to what the speaker want to emphasize.
12. The line “a throbbing soreness in the cranium” represents the state of the speaker’s brain as it was lost and drained. This is an example of visual imagery because cranium is part of the head particularly a bone protecting some part of the brain.
13.” A soul deeply entangled in a maze” is an example of metaphor. It stated there that his sinful soul was wrapped in many troubles and circumstances.
14. “LIGHT” symbolizes new hope and new life and God’s guidance for the speaker to take the right path. Yes, the poem is allegorical since some words that were used was not the exact literal meaning of what the speaker shared.
15.None
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