‘twas one blistering summer time
When the skies were blue and beach so cool
Old peers came to huddle with new ones
Amused with the playoffs and laughter
In a beach called Badiangon
Tossing soft, round, light and twirling thing
We shared the fun under the sweltering sun
Splattered cold spring water on faces
Pooled with the warm salty one
As laughter echoed like ricocheting waves
Like the merging of two strange waters
Streams of internal scarlet tears
Welled up and mingled with the fount of pain
Surging through one’s wounded heart
Bleeding, upon an unpleasant sight
A secret love and a friend alone together
Nattered what seemed like eternity
Under the shades of the water-growing trees
Unmindful of their audience. They were lost and so am I.
I wanted to blow up but found no reason to do so
What was that feeling that bloated my heart?
While I engaged myself in deep thinking
My head spun twice the twining object which came rushing forth
A flying saucer suddenly twirled down straight to my right leg
It gave me the reason to let go of my mounting emotions
I sobbed. I cried. I wailed like was wounded real badly
Sweat and tears flowed like mixed spring and the seawater
“Did it hurt so much?” inquired the player
My tears answered the questions
I wanted to tell them the truth behind my tears
If it wasn’t for the flying saucer
I would never have let go of the inner tempest
Crying did me good. It saved me from breaking
Honestly, the pain wasn’t really in my right leg
It was right here. Right here in my heart.
14 comments:
Probably the writer had a past relationship with the guy whom she with. But sad to say the friend of the writer maybe has a relationship of that guy whom the writer had a past or lets say secret relationship. Maybe the friend and the guy is so sweet, the writer reminisce the past and put some emotion with her feeling. Waiting for a time to trigger her emotion and let it go. Suddenly a flying saucer hit her, then the trigger is pulled. Emotions freely go outside the vaccuum. Flying saucer wont hurt because its soft and light.
Roldan Baldo
I think this story is all about the person who fallen in love with his friend, but so sad to say she keeps it secretly... That cause her pain inside her heart, its so painful that your loving someone, but in return friend only. The more u saw him everyday with someone the more pain u feels. A flying saucer suddenly twirled down straight to her right leg, and because of that she realize that she have to tell her true feelings to her friend so that all the pain inside her heart will go-out and she can move-on of whatever her friend reaction about her true feelings to him. I can say that the flying saucer was the key to makes her felt okey, perhaps the flying saucer can hurt but it will heal.
Jean Kathleen L.Amper
BSN-1
That story for me, was all about the writter who falls in love to his friend secretly, she keeps it secret because she knows in the end she will get hurt. The writer just wait for a time to let go of her fellings, and live it as her past. Just like flying saucer it can hit you anytime when someone plays and love can be painful when someone plays.
Gary Lloyd Salvacion
ACT - 2
i think that story is about love. person who secretly fallen in love with a beautiful girl/friend. when she notice that girl already have a boyfriend. and he wants to express his emotion/felling to that girl but she cant. it to late..
BY: Marwin M. Go.
ACT-1
Even if i have the tears inside me i try to cut it out.
No matter what happen i just to overcome the pain inside in me.
all the tears will flow but no else can that it flows.
I can fight, I will fight this feeling, so I will.
The tears, and pain of sacrifices will be vanish, Thanks fo the flying saucer.
REYNAN PENASO
I think this story tells about the pain, the tears, and the sacrifices that will need to overcome. no matter what happens theres a hope. don't stop believing just trust yourself and you will be happy.
I think this story tells about the pain, the tears, and the sacrifices that will need to overcome. no matter what happens theres a hope. don't stop believing just trust yourself and you will be happy.
REYNAN PENASO
i think that this story tells about the pain inside and the tears that bringing all the time. but we need to overcome it by trusting ourself.
EDCEL ABUCEJO
from that moment, the pain slolwly goes down
And letting me feel that a new beginning come starting again.
giving me a strength of courage and inspiration that life must go on.
ALIMBOG, JOSE,JR.
ACT-1
Something bump into my right leg, so called a flying saucer.
It bursts out what I felt inside,
the pain the sufferings,
the heartaches
cause by loving a friend secretly
who happens to be so dear to me.
I wanted to tell him the truth
behind my tears.
To think that I can't have him
for he is own by somebody;
that his heart doesn't belong to me.
The reality tells me and awakens me up
from my illusions that we can't be together as lovers
but only as friends.
MICHELLE P. CAGALAWAN
BSN-1
CT2
8s nice story,coz has a sense story...
4 me i realize, f i fall inlove wid any girls, 8s better 2 tel her d' truth, dan 2 keep it..
Noralden Maniri.
BSCS-1
For my understanding of this story is all about a person,who fall in love in someone,but suddenly that someone did not inlove to her/his.Thats why the person have pain and tears that bring all the time on his/her life.When the flying saucer hit his/her right leg, he cried,this is not mean that he/she cried because of the flying saucer hit on his/her leg.He cried because of the pain inside of his/her heart.And after that he/she realize that he/she must move on his/her life.
LAPUHAPO,CELESTE G.
It talks about person who fallen in love with his closed friend but He cannot tell her the truth about his feelings. He feel hurt so much and suffered the pain inside her heart. He want to voice his feelings but he can't do it...
GALAWAN, SALACODEN H.
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