Wednesday, January 27, 2010

incongruent

Amidst the tranquil emotions
Came an unexpected deep sensation
for something inconceivable, unreachable
Why is it so impossible?

Letting go of it, the better had it grown
In wonderland it was ever known
surfaced again, this forsaken affection
was never ever put to oblivion

Untimely 'tis you have come to existence
invaded my solitude, conquered my essence
I was lost when i found you, ah, irony
how can we ever patch up incongruity?

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

1. Ans.
-i think the speaker is a girl and she is in love. She is being bug by what she's experiencing and feeling. I could say that its her first love when she wrote this poem. She is full of love that she wrote it. And also the girl is worried about the sudden change of her hostile serene and undisturbed heart being fantastically in love.
2. Ans.
-Yes, there is an identifiable audience, and this is the boy she was in love with. Her first love, i could say that this boy is really something. For being able to give an effect on her. I guess the boy is handsome and has a really great personality.
3. Ans.
-I think the occasion was when the girl was alone. And she is able to ponder her solitude and examine what's happening to her. She's having her contemplation.
4.Ans.
-I think the setting in time of this poem is like 10 years ago. for the poem speaks that this girl seemed to be young at heart when she fell. and that this poem gives me an impression that it was created by summer in a quite afternoon. where the summer breeze is cool even its sunny but its windy i guess.
5.Ans.
-i guess the poem was made outdoor in land. in a mountain area, where grasses grow and breeze is cool that motivates her to write such poem of love.
6.Ans.
-the central purpose of the poem was to establish the love of the girl to the boy. And to let her love be known to what intensity it has. also, it tells about the impossibility of their love to happen due to its untimeliness.
7.Ans.
-the poem is all about a girl being in love with the boy. that the girl is very much in love and she is her first love. the poem also tells that the girl is really shattered with the emotion she have. that this feeling is foreign to her and it tells sadness for the love was not meant to be.
8.Ans.
-the tone of the poem is sad and lonely, for it talks about a love not given a chance to flourish. lonely for it talks about a love being ironic.
11. Ans.
-tranquil use to describe her emotion before she was in love
wonderland use to describe the love she feels
solitude describes her state of being
incongruity describes their difference
12. Ans.
- the imagery being use in the poem was the sense of feeling. sense of feeling being achieved by describing in the poem what she is feeling.
13.no ans
14.no ans
15.no ans
by: Dagondon, Charisse Mae A.

Anonymous said...

1. Ans.
-i think the speaker is a girl and she is in love. She is being bug by what she's experiencing and feeling. I could say that its her first love when she wrote this poem. She is full of love that she wrote it. And also the girl is worried about the sudden change of her hostile serene and undisturbed heart being fantastically in love.
2. Ans.
-Yes, there is an identifiable audience, and this is the boy she was in love with. Her first love, i could say that this boy is really something. For being able to give an effect on her. I guess the boy is handsome and has a really great personality.
3. Ans.
-I think the occasion was when the girl was alone. And she is able to ponder her solitude and examine what's happening to her. She's having her contemplation.
4.Ans.
-I think the setting in time of this poem is like 10 years ago. for the poem speaks that this girl seemed to be young at heart when she fell. and that this poem gives me an impression that it was created by summer in a quite afternoon. where the summer breeze is cool even its sunny but its windy i guess.
5.Ans.
-i guess the poem was made outdoor in land. in a mountain area, where grasses grow and breeze is cool that motivates her to write such poem of love.
6.Ans.
-the central purpose of the poem was to establish the love of the girl to the boy. And to let her love be known to what intensity it has. also, it tells about the impossibility of their love to happen due to its untimeliness.
7.Ans.
-the poem is all about a girl being in love with the boy. that the girl is very much in love and she is her first love. the poem also tells that the girl is really shattered with the emotion she have. that this feeling is foreign to her and it tells sadness for the love was not meant to be.
8.Ans.
-the tone of the poem is sad and lonely, for it talks about a love not given a chance to flourish. lonely for it talks about a love being ironic.
11. Ans.
-tranquil use to describe her emotion before she was in love
wonderland use to describe the love she feels
solitude describes her state of being
incongruity describes their difference
12. Ans.
- the imagery being use in the poem was the sense of feeling. sense of feeling being achieved by describing in the poem what she is feeling.
13.no ans
14.no ans
15.no ans
by: Dagondon, Charisse Mae A. BEED-3

Anonymous said...

The speaker is affectionate on their incongruence, by not having been achieved a state of becoming together. She shows approximation of opposed relation that cannot be completed and relentlessly, the speaker addresses it to someone who have overcome her inner being; and dramatically expresses sarcasm as she tries to emulate the things that did not work. The purpose of the poem is not just to express but to convey feelings of despair.

Annalie T. Pangantihon