please read the poem and read the instruction below after reading
I painted a rainbow but I doubt if I saved a promise
I sang but I doubt if I gave the right melody
I danced but I doubt if I made the right steps
I searched but I doubt if I found the answer
I taught a soul but i doubt if I made a difference
I write but I doubt if I am read
I express myself but I doubt if I am understood
I smile but I doubt if I am captured
I speak but I doubt if I am heard
I sow but i doubt if there will be harvest
I will keep my dream but I doubt if it will come true
I will wait but I doubt if there is something to hope for
I will fight but I doubt if it is worth the battle
I will move on but I doubt if it will be a great journey
I will survive but I doubt if it's possible without YOU!
instruction:
1. create a five-line poem(one stanza) as continuation of this poem.
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Study for Tuesday (December 16, 2008)long quiz and review...God Bless!
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Prof. D.
17 comments:
i prayed but i doubt if im heard
i stand still for her i doubt if i was noticed
i did everything for her i doubt if she realized it
i show happiness i doubt they've appreciated it
i go throwout my shell but i doubt if im ready to walk for my journey
clyde quirap
i will love him but im doudt if he loves me too
i will care for him but i doudt know if he cares me too
i will make him happy but i doubt if he will happy too
i will do everything to him but i doubt if he will too
jacky lou T. lumacad
BSN-1
eNGlish-2
Love is not a thing to understand.
Love is not a thing to feel.
Love is not a thing to give and receive.
Love is a thing only to become
And eternally be.
Gary Lloyd Salvacion
I love her but i doubt if she loves me too
I sacrifice myself for her happines but i doubt if she is happy
I did encounter craziness because of her but i doubt if she is encountered it also
I did an effort to pleased her but i doubt if she apprecaited it
This crazy little thing is called "love"
REYNAN PENASO
BSCS-1
I gotta find a way out but i doubt if there's a way out.
If I asked you to stay but i doubt if you will stay in me.
I was born to love you but i doubt if you love me.
I will bring you home but i doubt if you will go with me.
Letting go is the hardest thing to do.
RANARIO, NICK ALJO L.
BSCS-1
i love but i doubt if he love me
i was hurt but i doubt if he feel the pain
i smile to hide the pain but i doubt if he noticed it in my eye
i loss my way but i doubt if he see it
i thought i can do it but i doubt if i cant make it to accept the fact that he's gone for me forever....
donna may omul
bsn-1
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I make things good but I doubt it would not be finished
I survived but I doubt I miss something on it
I realize but I doubt it was too late
I achieve but I doubt it wasn't enough
I choose to be silent but I doubt It needs to express now
ALIMBOG JOSE,JR.
ACT-I
I know now why Shakespeare could not compare his love to a summer’s day.
It would be a crime to denounce the beauty of such a creature as thee,
to simply cast away the precision
God had placed in forging you.
But I do not wish release.
I wish to stay entrapped forever.
Bacong, Hazel Mae H.
ACT-1
A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
In a special world, where we belong.
Jumawan, Manilyn B.
ACT-1
I surrender my heart to you but I doubt you will not render your heart to HER
I hold on to your promise but I doubt you will not hold on to HER promise
I take the risk in loving you but I doubt you will not take the risk in loving HER
I am your everything but I doubt you will not surrender everything for HER
I let go but I doubt if this is what you want, to be with HER or to be with ME.
MICHELLE P. CAGALAWAN
BSN-1
I laugh out loud but i doubt if I am happy
I hope for love but I doubt if the answer is within me
I cry but I doubt if there are heartaches I could forget
I listen but I doubt if there is something I might regret
I pray but I doubt if God would grant my wish to be with you
Edsel G. Gamala
BSCS-1
i have a doubt to do things
i have a doubt to pray of God
i have a doubt to be perfect
i have a life to prove my special things
i have to sacrifice my life to do i have to be.
Carl Vhinson T.Orig
ACT-1
i hate I think I had enough but its not.
I think I waited long enough but its not enough.
I think its time to forget. But it’s hard.
I think time can heal. But time could not erase.
And i think she’s not the one.(=^.^=)
By: Marwin go
ACT-1
I want to show my talent but doubt if I can make it
I want to be one of her friends but I doubt if she wants too
I want to finish my studies but I doubt if I can proceed,due to my financial problem
I want to become a nursing someday but I doubt if I can survive
I want to express my feelings to my mother but I doubt if she understand me.
Jean kathleen L.Amper
BSN-1
I laugh out loud but i doubt if I am happy
I hope for love but I doubt if the answer is within me
I cry but I doubt if there are heartaches I could forget
I listen but I doubt if there is something I might regret
I pray but I doubt if God would grant my wish to be with you
Edsel G. Abucejo
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